1.21.16
on May 1, 2023
at 3:00 am
made a cool design decision here that I definitely did not regret at any point
Aurora
A fantasy webcomic. Updates M-W-F.
made a cool design decision here that I definitely did not regret at any point
For mobile readers.
Alt-text: “lemme just make this one page………… TWO pages”
Image source: silence
As a mobile reader, touch-hold works, if the name it too long, tap it
It seems like whether that works depends on OS, browser, device or whatever else
It IS a very cool design decision tho…
Also, angsty Falst backstory on wednesday? Pretty please?
So that mom theory…
THE MOM THEORY ???? FALST NOOOOO
I KNEW IT NO NO NO-
A BED.They FOUND her, tried to nurse her back to health- that’s “Emira” again, top right corner, she was probably in a hospital of some shorts, and then she awoke and she-
HE WAS SO SMALL LOOK AT HIM. HE MIGHT NOT EVEN HAVE KNOWN WHY
…
my heart feels weird
Sympathies @Testing! I hope you will be OK! Empathy!
I appreciate, but I feel the rest of this chapter is going to have a very similar effect honestly 😀
I don’t mind at all. I love this story and how many different emotions it is able to conjure up
F*CK I JUST REALISED I’TS HER GRAVE NOT A RANDOM TABLET AND I HAD TO RUSH BACK
HIS MOTHER TURNED INTO A CAVE CRAWLER AND TRIED TO EAT HIM!
OH, HECK NAW! EASY ON THE TRAUMA, PLEASE RED!
he’s so scared )): get this man an herbal tea NOW
Oh no. The ancient text, little Falst and his mum…
What’s going on in the panel with Falst and that figure? Is someone hanging off a ledge? Is Falst in a tunnel?
Also, Dainix is in the bottom left corner.
Also, whatever those things are in Dainix’s hand. Another explosion incoming
I believe that’s Falst seeing his reflection in some sort of mirror, or more likely a pool of water, with the transformed figure of what is probably his mother looming behind him.
Okay now I just wanna hug him… poor Falst needs therapy so badly
Okay, cool cool cool-
I can’t tell what is happening in the flahback panel directly right of the one where she bears her teeth- did he see her in a mirror? Methinks sooner or later we’ll get to see this scene on the foreground, narrated or remembered.
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Hey, Red? Amazing job.
Looks like he is looking down on some kind of puddle and sees her approaching from behind.
Yes, definitely an amazing job, I was just blown away.
Also, could this be one of the reasons he was so desperate about turning human?
I think that mostly stemmed from how he has been treated throughout all these years, as he put it earlier- I think if he does consider himself “a monster”, he considers cave crawlers even lesser; “not [people] anymore”.
Though perhaps, part of the hatred could be stemming from his father (who we haven’t seen in-comic yet, and from whom he inherited the Ferin mutation). If I were asked to make a random, heartbreaking guess right now, I’d say, perchance,
maybe he had to kill her.
Also, you’re right! I just now noticed the angle of the reflection. That’ll help visualise the scene more accurately
In the last panel it looks like she pushes him into the puddle.
It looks like she pushes him into the puddle in that last panel.
Gaaah, I can’t figure out how this comment system works. Sorry for any inconvenience my ineptitude has caused.
Sometimes it just takes a couple minutes for your comments to load, so you might not see them right away.b
I appreciate that you commented the same thing three times in three slightly different ways though 😀
In the last panel it looks like she pushes him into the water.
Mother. Was that his mother.
Also, I like that Dainix still IS a small shard of his focus.
*sing-song* Childhood Trauma! Childhood Trauma!
i read this to the tune of “emotional damage”
aaiiiiiiiii, that is the coolest comic book page design I have ever seen!!
Marvelous job of showing “current” action in color and “past” action seen behind color panels in black black and white appearing in behind in mope detail the further down the panel I look/perceive. Another excellent example of creative comicbook art style created by Red I think if I am interpreting correctly. I tell you it delights my perception/thoughts/day!
Well, as incredibly upsetting as that is, can we all just take a moment to appreciate the fact that TINY FALST IS ADORABLE!
In the prettiest page I have seen for a while
We see the trauma that his focus defiles
Also MOM THEORY CONFIRMED!!!!
So guess ‘The Mom Theory’ isn’t looking like much of a theory anymore, huh?
this whole arc feels like it’s building towards something that’s going to emotionally ruin me and I can not wait to find out how it goes down.
Same. You can just *feel* that something bigger is being built up to here.
I eagerly anticipate more art Wednesday to confirm you statement or validate your communication! Heck, I just suffer less just thinking about what Red will send out at that time now! Sorry incomprehensive. I try communicate compact. Apologies!
So… guess ‘The Mom Theory’ isn’t just a theory anymore huh?
Christ this whole arc feels like it’s building towards something that’s going to absolutely emotionally ruin me and I for one can not wait to see how it happens.
damn it how do you delete comments
You don’t. You live with the doublepost.
I forgive communicate!
Damn Red, hitting us in the feels with this one.
And the amount of work that must have gone into this… I’ve seen a webcomic artist do his thing on Twitch, I have at least a vague feel for how much work goes into layout. This feels like it would have been a nightmare to organize, and I bet panels had to be redrawn, or you had to go back to base panels you’d made and recut them to put them at a new angle, etc.
It’s gorgeous though. Bravo.
Can someone please link to wherever this “Mom Theory” was
Please
It was just a thing in the Discord I believe. Red posted some sketches of Tiny Falst & Mom and then a crawler on the next page, and some people made the connection that the crawler’s blouse had the same neckline as Mom’s. The pics are in the Sketches section above, IIRC.
I know everyone’s talking about Mom theory, but I really like the shrinking present-day panels to symbolize Falst losing himself in the past. I also like tiny Dainix in the bottom, showing he’s still there, but Dainix is the furthest thing from Falst’s mind right now.
All in all, good page, very meaningful
…Where was Falst’s dad throughout all this? It doesn’t look like he’s in any of the flashbacks. Did he abandon them? Did they abandon him? Was he killed by bigots or wildlife? Does it have something to do with “You will find your way if you are truly my son”?
Second flashback panel: Falst’s left arm is covered in gashes.
I did not perceive Daniax picture in this panel until after reading comments! Thank you @Unknwon post comments!
Hey, does anyone know what the runes say? They look like Ancient runes to me, but I don’t have the cipher for those– can anyone translate, please? I will post more about it if/when I get the cipher and if they say something that we might recognize.
The ancient runes say “Emira”, courtesy of Testing-the-waters.
There once was a poor Ferin boy
Whose trauma came up to decoy
His sense of now,
Remembering how
His mom these things destroy.
IT’S HERE FOLKS, THE TWO-IN-ONE SPECIAL!! GET IT WHILE IT’S HOT!! ONLY AT COMICAURORA.COM, BABEYYY
In the third backstory panel, it kinda looks like someone has a ponytail that could be Falst’s dad. Also do we think that the ruin are a grave stone? If so for Falst’s dad or mom? And finally if that is a grave stone why is it written in ancient ruins? Danix was asking about any ancient family earlier.
*sorry for any grammatical errors
ok that it a really cool visual effect
The art: Amazing, efficient at communicating Falst’s mental state
The content: Concerning, to say the least
TL;DR: *Trauma intensifies*
Oh, and I have an AP test today, so at least that encourages me to get this post in early!
oh…i like this
I am confusion…
I really like how dynamic and unique this page is, even if it prevents me from figuring out what the heck’s happening.
But at least I’m finally caught up, yay!
So Mom theorists, how we feeling? Also I cannot get over how beautiful this panel is, every time I look at it there’s a new detail I missed and it’s inspired way too many emotions.
This page is beautiful. just beautiful in a heartwrenching way. So much emotion in that effect.
Looks like SOMONE’S got MOMMY ISSUESSSSSSSS
(I’m so sorry, I just needed to be flippant in order to not break down sobbing this is actually a heartbreaking page)
Red, the effort that you put in is what makes both Aurora and OSP amazing. I’m sorry this was a lot of work but damn it was worth it.
“Ok press pause, I’m making tea.”
Ow my feelings.
IT’S FLASHBACK TIME HERE WE GO!
The mom theory has been confirmed!
I think one of the top flashback panels (second from the left) looks like Falst’s dad leaving, because of the hair, cape, and headband. That would imply that he was present for this, but he doesn’t seem to have been active in the whole debacle.
Seeing the gravestone for Emira, we were right that it’s his mom’s name, but this also means that Falst probably only knows those runes, and most likely can’t read Ancient. The real question is why is it Ancient in the first place? How did Emira die? And why is she experiencing cave corruption in a house and not the caves themselves?
The shrinking and fragmentation of the present panels as Falst gets more and more lost in the past is so effective and upsetting.
Now we see if Dainix can drag him out of there without getting mauled. 🙁
That last panel(?) is so well done, I’m surprised I haven’t seen arrangements like that more often cause it looks sick!
WELL WE CERTAINLY KNOW IT’S A BACKSTORY THING NOW
Also oh my god the composition of this page I am jealous
It’s like the real comic just shattered and we can now see the comic that Falst thinks he’s in while fighting underneath. I love how even without words we can get an idea of what likely happened (mom (probably) got cave corrupted, they thought she was just ill, oops now this is a horror comic).
If I may add a little conspiracy theory here, I wonder if he blames the whole Ferin thing on why it seems no one came to help before the horror movie stage. If it was cave corruption due to famine or being forced to hide in the caves(in turn due to the world’s attitude toward Ferin), then he would probably still be resentful about it, and if it were directed inwards, then that might explain a lot
(Sorry for wall of text)
this is GORGEOUS, and *immediately* going on my list of favorite Aurora pages.
And yea, what you said!!! I love how the panels just kind of fracture down the page, the farther down we go the more the present cracks & the past shows through…
I love the theory! That seems very plausible.
Appreciated communication desire less awareness ‘wall of text’ by readers/suffering. Reciprocated?
Sorry? I don’t think I understand what that means
Can you clarify?
????what the hell????
It was a good decision, Red. A very, very good decision with many excellent dynamic poses, with stylistic exposition. I can not give enough kudos on an excellent action page!
well, sh!t.
Ah, Trauma.
This page is FANTASTIC.
As a martial artist of mmmmany years, I’m noticing something here: Falst is not using his claws. Only blunt force trauma. Which is interesting, to say the least.
“Only blunt force trauma”
*coughs* While having traumatic flashbacks. good job (that I suspect was accidental, but good job either way 😀 )
Oh. OOOH. Ooh, I’ll remember this one for future reference. Thanks!
Blunt force trauma to heads, and in head. :3 Oh yes, there are some players out there that will have some blunt trauma from blunt punning soon.
Only blunt force trauma, when his claws can etch stone and safely be used to slash at people without fear of getting ripped off. Definitely notable. Maybe cave crawler blood carries corruption?
Red, this looks amazing, what the heck
Somebody’s working through some trauma and frustrations.
That. Is. …A SICK Design!!! =D
O h w o w
I never noticed this the first time through
Now this hits so hard
When does he tell this story