OMG! he needs to tone down the sensetivity a little. hi i’m rereading this story and analysing it and i just realized that Kendal ia a little too sensetive.
Kendal and Alliuna shipper and Erin x Falst shipper
I like your name, as in fandoms and communities saying person and person means you ship them platonically, while saying person x person or person/person means you ship them romantically. You understand that Vashn’t is canonically Aro/Ace as he is too young to understand love, and Red being the Ace queen that she is won’t make a subplot where Vashn’t/Kendal learns to love, if there will be romance then it will be between different characters.
@Kendal and Alliuna shipper and Erin x Falst shipper
He’s basically a baby, but with the memories of a god whose city got destroyed and has spent out a significant portion of his life unconscious and bleeding out at this point in the story. Cut him some slack.
Ok…. This is the problem I had from the start of this comic, and it shows perfectly in this page. The comic is a grievous example of “telling not showing”. There is so much potential for visually showing the lone craftsman writing in his field notes while experiencing the struggles of losing control over the ancient statues. The line “voice like sandpaper on strings” really strikes me that this story may have been better portrayed in a different medium, like a written novel or a string of videos with accompanying visuals. (I say this because this page is hauntingly similar to Red’s youtube videos to the point I can hear her voice reading it.) While the visuals are striking, and it’s very easy to see that Red has a firm grasp on how to make a scene look good, there just isn’t enough of it.
No one’s commented yet cause we’re all too busy holding our breath.
Is that a custom font?
One man with a sword vs. a giant Golem thing… Yeah, he’s got this
So the swamp witch put a hex on him. Can she seal herself away in the stone then because she has vash’s soul in her nazgul dagger?
TL;DR: Not-Vash gets distracted by Vash’s memories until he notices that the primitive mecha is trying to squish him again.
OMG! he needs to tone down the sensetivity a little. hi i’m rereading this story and analysing it and i just realized that Kendal ia a little too sensetive.
mmm The hug moment let’s say as a shipper i loved it
I like your name, as in fandoms and communities saying person and person means you ship them platonically, while saying person x person or person/person means you ship them romantically. You understand that Vashn’t is canonically Aro/Ace as he is too young to understand love, and Red being the Ace queen that she is won’t make a subplot where Vashn’t/Kendal learns to love, if there will be romance then it will be between different characters.
the alt text
“vash: “that sounds rad as hell, and I don’t know enough about statue enchantment to dispute it”
@Kendal and Alliuna shipper and Erin x Falst shipper
He’s basically a baby, but with the memories of a god whose city got destroyed and has spent out a significant portion of his life unconscious and bleeding out at this point in the story. Cut him some slack.
Oh boi, first fair fight
Ok…. This is the problem I had from the start of this comic, and it shows perfectly in this page. The comic is a grievous example of “telling not showing”. There is so much potential for visually showing the lone craftsman writing in his field notes while experiencing the struggles of losing control over the ancient statues. The line “voice like sandpaper on strings” really strikes me that this story may have been better portrayed in a different medium, like a written novel or a string of videos with accompanying visuals. (I say this because this page is hauntingly similar to Red’s youtube videos to the point I can hear her voice reading it.) While the visuals are striking, and it’s very easy to see that Red has a firm grasp on how to make a scene look good, there just isn’t enough of it.
He gathers all his knowledge in a rant inside his head
Before wondering how to avoid ending up dead
the coolest page in the whole comic imo